This is a small sample of the feedback I was given for my initial film pitch. The positives to take from the feedback is the fact that my idea wasn't confusing and everyones feedback showed that they had a clear idea on genre, audience and the general storyline which means that the film will appeal to a wide audience.
Pointers that I can take for future presentations are to include films which gave me inspiration and also to present ideas from where I would find inspiration for the title of the film.