Improvements Made as result of Feedback

 This screenshot shows that I changed the title at the end of the film from 'The Deal' to 'Written and Directed by' as in the feedback people said that with the film title at the end it felt like a short film or trailer so that had to be changed.
 This shows the extra sound mixing that I did in order to make the film sound fluent. All of the levels were adjusted and ADR was use for clearer speak in some passages.
 The timer shot was added as it was not included in the first draft along with all of the VFX. So I filmed and added in the timer shot with the countdown tracked on top of the device.
This shows that I found names for all the crew members instead of the place holder of 'Some Person'. I also tweaked the position and timing of the titles and changed the font for it to fit more fluidly with the genre.