Evaluation Question 5

How did you attract/ address your audience?


Audience Feedback:

This is the feedback that I gained from sending out a survey to my audience. The replies were all from people between the ages of 15-20 of mixed genders. This was my original target audience for my film. 100 percent of the people surveyed said that they would continue to watch the rest of the film which means that I have left sufficient enigma for people to want to continue watching The Deal.

The general comments that I received on the film were about the issues that I faced with the dying of the light during filming. As the filming wasn't completed chronologically the scene was very dark in the forest scenes however the very last shot of the leader was in fading sunlight even though the previous shots were in darkness.

On the question asked about pacing everyone responded with the fact that it was well paced. This was an improvement over one of my early drafts as it cut out some of the slower action and removed parts that were dragging.

With the target audience I am trying to pull it is of the up most importance have a film that is well if not slightly faster paced to keep this younger generation engaged in the film.